The following is just a made up story...it has no resemblance what so ever with my life or anyone else's!! Please have a read....
"I am lying here seeing whatever shit is coming on TV when i start to ponder over how my life became such a shithole! It was not always like this, though. Once I had a life, a real life- one with true friends and one where enjoyment took the front seat!
Back in class 12...
I was a popular kid, friends would flock around me. I was average at studies, even had a girlfriend whom i really loved! I was studying my ass off just to get into IIT! Life was parties, dates, phone calls and study!! All this had to change...and change it did when suddenly came one stupid school exam which i flunked badly! Around the same time that bitch I used to call my girlfriend gave up on me and started sticking to my closest friend. That f**king bitch could be seen cuddling up with the guy in search of gifts and in her attempt to rob the guy's purse just like she would do with me! By the time I managed to get over her, my bloody results came out! Mum n dad were pissed off big time and I was informed everything would be off limits till exams!! My only excursion out of my hellhole of a house would be my tuitions!!
All this marked the start of a new life for me. My main motto in life became " WHEN LIFE F**CKS YOU, YOU F**K IT BACK". So I became friends with a different group of people and started skipping tuitions and started going bar hopping!! I hardly remember going to tuition for the last 3 months. Then, one day, one of the guys introduced me to coke( coke = a kind f drug for those who dont know) and I took to it like fish to water! Time flied, life was good again though in a different way. I had friends, i had fun and didnt give a damn about the world!! Again, someone had to put some shit exams in my way to ruin my f**king life. I managed to scrape through my boards exam but engineering remained a distant dream! The results f**ked up my mind even more...
Suddenly I wake up one day in this shithole. I am locked in this room I cant do anything...I desperately need something, the thing that took away my sorrow!! Coke-I need coke!! Doc says I barely managed to survive from drug overdose!!! Doc, you are wrong dude, I am dead...This is not life..I dont need in this life you say I have!!! Life is what I had before all this!! Goddamn it..either give me that life back or let me die in peace with my coke!!!!
very good article!! waise where did u gt the inspiration to write about it!!mast present kiya hai!!keep it up!!
ReplyDeleteever read the book called "catcher in the rye"...try dat....dis aint bad eithr...
ReplyDeleteman its simply awesome.........really happy to read an article after a long time which just knocked my socks off....fantastic..
ReplyDeletebelow average paragraph...
ReplyDeletelanguage resembles greatly with chetan bhagat's...
the writin style is realistic,really makes u feel d intensity f d situation,but d plot is i gues common..mane emni onek case ache..bt yes gud1.
ReplyDeletedon't you think the story is a bit too general ... i mean its a good attempt ... but go for newer n more innovative topics ... tobe this is gud enuf 4 a first try .. keep it up ..:)
ReplyDeletesome gud attempt..
ReplyDelete2 much of 'f**k' dsnt give weight 2 wht ur sayin..
2 rapid.. i mean dsnt give tym fr 1 idea 2 settle.. shud hv been longer wid s same storyline..
well attempted..
the use of the f word ..emphasizes the fack that the narrator is a pretty fucked up...
ReplyDeleteawesum..i lykd it :)
but dude..u dnt know wat its lyk to have coke? do u?
come to my college one day ..if u need sum :P
lol.
Sounak
mast hai..
ReplyDelete:) gud work
nice n i think some part is real too.......rite??? lolz...gud story n kinda sad tht u wld let a grl do that to u.......
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